taught me the magic
of strings of syllables,
to sip inspiration
from the simplest things.
of strings of syllables,
to sip inspiration
from the simplest things.
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Dedicated to my Mom, who taught me to love poetry.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie - PIF- 15 poets x 15 words by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended June 30, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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not much to say about this other than well said and so eloquently constructed. its amazing to me how you are able to morph simplicity with complexion.
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This is beautiful. I love the simplicity of it. :]
"taught me the magic
of strings of syllables,"
Absolutely- poetry is magic. Beautifully put. :]"to sip inspiration from the simplest things." I love that. It's so true. Poets create beauty from the smallest things. :] Great write. A well deserved gold
-Lily♥
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Great i liked this alot. Really short but it explained alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly
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Very sweet and touching... I see why Jackie fell in love with this... Well done.
Ken
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aaww
such simple lines with awesome imagery and simple feelings which are beautiful!! I could almost see the smiles and the strings and how life should be like this. congrats on the aweosme gold too!
transit~
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Aww very well deserved for the Gold! Congrats
Ruby
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this is a beautiful write, the wording and tribute is well deserved of the gold and the flow and softness in your words is beautiful hun well done
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What a tribute the Gold for you and Mom...and she taught you poetry,,,,,such a short write, even the font was good for it....I loved it!
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Hey! Congrats on the Gold!!! Very well deserved.
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Gosh, this choked me up. So beautiful. And I always love it when the title is a part of the poem. It becomes so central to this piece.
Lovely!
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oh my!!! LOVELY!!!! !
~all my best!!!!!!!!
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S.P.
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Stunning C
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The Treasure
of teaching is in the lessons passed on. You have captured that thought quite well. Wonderfully Written.
Best of Luck
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I really adore this. Hope you don't mind me playing with it....
"You"
Taught me the magic
of strings of syllables
to sip inspiration
from the simplest things
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
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You made it fifteen words. You have no idea how much I love you right now.
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lol, you're welcome. It was worth it. Hope you win.
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I hope you win.
I like yours a lot better! 
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