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In Awe of You

I lie still and listen to you as you breathe, the rhythm is soothing and hypnotic and before long I find myself drifting away.

As I close my eyes you are already there looking at me as sweetly as you do. Your bright eyes engulf me in to their sea of blue.

You smile so warmly that it melts all my worries from the day away.

Soon I feel your arms as you wrap them around me and pull me close into you.

Inhaling I smell a mixture of the cologne that you put on this morning and you, smiling now because to me there is no safer place in the world than right there in your arms.

Listening to your heart beat there is no other sound I hear until you softly mutter I love you. Hesitantly I open my eyes, and let out a soft and relieved sigh, no you are not just a dream but a dream come true.

I snuggle in closer to you and close my eyes as I listen to you breathe.

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  • EmeraldNymph
    August 7, 2008
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    sweet and lovely

    well written and very sweet

    an excellent piece


  • PatPthebarefootpoet silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    Beautiful job Kukana!

    Nice imagery in this work. I am in awe as I read it.Visual...imaginative and so creative. You certainly grabbed my attention. THANKS!!


  • suseann silver member
    June 30, 2008
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    Unison perfection personified verse! WOW! Unabashidly open and beautiful.


  • Ronztrek
    June 29, 2008

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    Adorable!

    It amazes me to witness such a sweet tribute to love. A love that is intensified with the littlest of things such a a smile or a heart beating and not only with diamond rings and expensive trips. Great Job, a read well worth while!