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The Travellers

 

 

 

 

Upon floating timbers

together held with dreams

 

 

 

They search their horizons

through eyes of the evermore

 

 

Feet walking on new

lands found

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Lotus-Mama
    June 30, 2008

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    "Upon floating timbers
    together held with dreams"

    I love this line! My favorite is the middle couplet, but 'their' is repeated twice, you could try taking it out in the first line to read....

    "They search horizons
    within their hearts"

    But hey, what do I know? Thanks for entering! Beautiful write!