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Estranged Love

Missing image

Hanging around you for so long,
     I have watched you cry in the rain,

awakened to the sun, you've bloomed,
     right before my eyes, driving me insane



We managed to remain connected,
     and I know that my drooling is hectic

you have always managed to make me blush,
     by being sweet to me, no matter what....

We must be nuts













Author notes

Prompt: Picture Prompt (30-60 words)

Image~ "Cherries in Love" by: Meppol (deviant)

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  • garde a l eau
    July 8

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    That last line, "We must be nuts, " is priceless... just the pits! Enough rainy days and cherry blossom blushes makes for some delectable fruit... Sweet, Sweet.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 30
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    Cute write!! Nuts not cherries hey? lol


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    June 30
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    lol this one made me smile Jason...thanks ...best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • Sanshay
    June 29
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    lol Nuts are good to eat, are we nuts? perhaps.


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 29
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  • Stardust-luvr
    June 29

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    lol lol my friend a true essense of humour indeedy makes me think of a banana split lol e'nuf said lol lol well done and many blessings always xxx


  • xianariaslifetime gold member
    June 29

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    This made me giggle, a sweet write full of love and life.
    Perfection!

    ~Lisa~


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 29

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    Such a playful and very sweet take on the chosen prompt! Nicely penned, with a nice flow. Thank you for your entry!

  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    June 29

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    Awww I like this. It's witty and very cleverly done... haha, we must be nuts. Like the rhyme and the first letter of each stanza being huge! anyways, best of luck with this.


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    June 29

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    Awesome!


    Best of luck♥

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