Thick long black hair
Piercing blue eyes
Lightly freckled skin
Perfectly manicured toes
Strapy black sandals
Long toned legs
Dark black mini skirt
Bubble gum pink top
Flawless skin
I was seeing sex and candy in one stare
Yes this surly was a dream
Yes my friend this surly was a dream
Black lace panties
Bare stomach
Black lace perfectly filled c cup bra
Pale pink diamonds
French manicured nails
Candy coated lips
I Saw sex and candy in one stare
I cast deviant stares in her direction
I tell myself "yes my friend this surly is a dream"
Author notes
Ok so i chose to do the "sex and candy" option. I used some of the words and changed some of them to. I dont even know if the way i wrote it fits into ur contest but if not please tell me and ill take it out.
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A contest entry
- OPTIONS! :) by Beverlique.
350 points, ended July 13, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2146 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do u think, how can i improve ooo and my spelling sucks so if u see somthing to change let me know
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ohhhhhhhhhh the title caught my attention! LOL
quite beautiful in a naughty way... This is very good!!! -
heehee
so cute. Hope to see more good 1z like dis
O fyi my spelling sux too
I like talking like i do on aim or msn XD
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hmm C cup bra, eh? nice!
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so intrigina!!awesome write
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Intriging
NICE I like what you have done here with this sex and candy.............. is it by chance cotton candy?? i wonder...... hmm melty, yummy sweet cotton............. LOL, OOPS...... see what ya done
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i like, i like a lot...
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A beautiful erotica...
so appealing...
so seductive...
and lustful...
Kisses on your 'long toned legs', honey!
Galaxy2
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Nice job! I love where you took this prompt. The detail really makes me see this woman you talk about. sex and candy...hmm...interesting. Ofcourse it fits this is an anything contest. Amazing job! Love it!
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wow brook! this is smoking!!!lol!
wow brook! this really is smoking! i dont know what the parameters of the contest are but you definately nailed "sex and candy" in a very descriptive way! i had to read it twice not to understand it but to savor it! you spelled out the perfect hottie in a very sensuous sort of way. the bubblegum pink top contrasting with the black miniskirt sounds provacative expecially with the reference to the bare belly and flawless skin.
you paint a picture of a living dream to any who deviantly stare at her.
living candy is what i read and picture and my hats off to you for bringing the picture to life with only the written word!
HA! this is cool!!!!
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hhaaha
wow
lol
cute
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this is really cool...i like the whole sex-and-candy-in-one-stare!!
as for spelling...surly should be surely =)
great work!
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