Guardian of my dreams
sent out to sea,
[Enduring love]
The ocean softly sings..
As I await your return...
Author notes
Pen something in 20 words
Suomyno at Devinat Art
http://suomyno.deviantart.com/art/Leaving-our-mark-90189749
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: PHOTO Prompt by Lotus-Mama.
475 points, ended June 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You have painted a great picture with your words
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Interesting take - your dream's guardian sent out to sea, it sings as you wait. Congratulations on the HM.
Marlene -
I like these few spoken words. I like how you went with the prompt, it suited it well. Congratulations on the trophy! Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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LoL, I wrote a poem with the same title before, but it was infinitely less good.
"sent out to sea,"
Like this...has a tragic vibe.
Anyways, congrats on the HM =]
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This is so beautiful... has a navy feel to it....romantic and tender! Great job!!!
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aww this is really cute very love filled,
i like this lots it should place,
all my love, keep penning,
kitty xxx -
Wow, twenty words of brilliance! I like 'Guardian of my dreams' particularly; its a really nice metaphor. Great work and good luck
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wow this is beautiful full of the beautiful rippling waves of love from you heart and soul good luck in the contest
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Oh this is stunning! beautifully soft and rich with romance. Love is evident here. passionately penned with your whole heart as always. great job!!
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Thanks hun.. I'm glad that you like it
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