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Tears and Rain

i wish to surender my soul
let me please shed these cloths that have become part of my skin
but still hide form your eyes
the liar that burns within
the chose between darkness an cold
i now regret
cold is fare more persing
i scream out loud
the sound never leaving my stiched up mouth
find comfort in pain
all the pleasure's are the same
it just keeps me from trouble
help me hide my true shape
my ears here what they say
but i promise the stars
its not just words
just tears and rain
come take a walk threw the doors of my mind
see what you find
hold the memories close to hand
how i wish i could choose between heaven and hell
come can you save my soul
so cold from fear
these are not just words
their are tears and rain

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  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    August 31, 2008
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    This is pretty good...Good Luck! Sorry that this contest took so long!