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Wonder





stunned senses
partaking in grandeur
breathless















Words: K.Botka
6/29/08

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His grandeur leaves me breathless!

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  • Cynewulf
    June 29

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    This might make a good chorus in a longer poem. Maybe linked haiku with a theme interspersed with this. It makes great use of sibilants (s sounds). Nice.