Again and again the earth swaps quadrants
Within it's outer atmosphere, clouds lonely
Remains circumvented half fragmented
That cast shadow upon the dark space.
The universe watches in ore of earths fashion
The people on earth await signs with a passion.
Around and around spins the cycle of earth
The earths orbit lies low beneath the surface
Soil born of fresh compositions of unknown
Origins. Wandered ground pondered
leaving footprints on the green grass.
The united stars twinkle in ore of earths habitation
The future visitations when ready promise relations.
The earths extensions detect change
The satellites extend range
The telescopes myopic frames
And finally mans evolution reigns.
A contest entry
- Mysteries of the Universe by enitsirhC.
555 points, ended July 2, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you read the news about the milk product in America and the dumbing down of news?
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Nice rhyming; this gives my a solstice feel. How was Stonehenge?
I haven't heard the milk news but there was something on the German news about BSE and American beef imports where the people protesting it were being beaten by police. I really think importing foreign beef is an extremely bad idea at this point. -
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Stonehenge
May have been good it seems the weather has been fine. Glastonbury is a great town always busy with Jazz music and differing selections of spiritual offerings, oh and gothic publishers. I have not been for a while, last time I went was Oct 31st, it was strange I seen two moons that evening. About the milk post I'm not sure how that got in this poem I don't remember attaching this to the poem. I think there may be a fault in the system. Thanks for the news about the beef, my friend who is a bouncer has a contact for Brazilian Beef, serloines, in fact it was yummy, but what you say has been noted, I'll think twice next time. best wishes Rob B.
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