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Tears (silent signs of sadness)



Silent signs of sadness
That echo in the heart
Powerful in their grasp
Knowledge they impart

these, my silent saviours,
they help me to express
these, my honest grievers,
they share my tenderness

when things get overwhelming,
my tears are by my side
they know all of my secrets,
no sense trying to hide

will you share my silent sadness?
will this world show no remorse?
will you share silent sadness?
will you show no remorse?

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Written as Freewrite practice on the subject; Tears

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    Wow! Beautiful.

    Yes, I share your silent sadness and I show my remorse. Tears are so good for us; healing and cleansing - expressing our deepest feelings that cannot be put into words. Thank God for tears!

    Lovely write. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed it!