who knew where life leads
within those paths reaching along
like fingers reaching
into conscientiousness
whispers heard
revealing sometimes wisdom
yet allowing one to see the magic
within those windows
only for a short time
and yet I find myself
lost within the wilderness
trying only to understand it all
stumbling within that enlightened path
that something tries to lead me through
feeling like a fool
yet the days linger on
will I ever reach that hidden path
that so many search for?
or do the years just continue
allowing my mistakes to reveal
that something that most see
right in front of themselves?
Please tell me what you think
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mistakes are revealed time and time again and often unfortunately history repeats itself. i once remember reading if we could just start old and then get young
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"will I ever reach that hidden path
that so many search for?
or do the years just continue
allowing my mistakes to reveal
that something that most see
right in front of themselves?"
You've asked the question of the recent days for me. I recommend you to read my poem, "Underneath Sunny Skies" Seems we were thinking alike in June.
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This a rather thought provoking write, upon readin the last few lines I am forced to question the question, does anyone really see whats right in front of them? Retrospect seems the only way...I like the sense of searching in the poem and I also get a sense of acceptance....life is what it is....great poem
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i will pick up here on the magic that you speak about yes
we all stumble about of course we do, but that is part of the fun of it, to go along the road and dance.
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Dear Bill, You keep your positive attitude and everything will come to you. I enjoyed reading your poem, and like the baby in the picture.
Love Joan
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I really liked the lines you ended this with, it's kind of like saying that some people see things so clearly, but other have to search so long for answers
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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