You thought you were my one and only,
You were wrong; you were just in my way
Never again will I lean in and trust you.
I could’ve been everything you wanted
But you let me fall and I’m not coming back
I would’ve taken a bullet for you,
Killed for you, laughed with you.
You however chose to ignore me
Killing me slowly with your ignorance.
No longer am I your shield,
No longer will I take the abuse.
I’m free from the likes of you.
I want someone to take me through this nightmare
Someone strong and brave
Someone who isn’t at all like you.
This pain of mine will eventually leave
Your lies no longer penetrate my mind
I’m now clean, clean from you.
The memories are fading,
Just like our lives, no longer intertwined.
And one day you’ll come running back
But I won’t return.
You’ll beg on bended knees
And still, I won’t heed your cries.
That should teach you to mess with my head
Your charm won’t come back,
Or your zealotry with it.
I’m no longer in love with you
And now that I'm off that path
Ill never return.
Author notes
i wrote this quite quickly so i apologize if it's not that great..
In a list
A contest entry
- MOODS.....WHAT'S YOURS? by AddictiveTRUTH.
1200 points, ended July 1, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I could’ve been everything you wanted
But you let me fall and I’m not coming back
very pretty
and SADDD.
:| the use of the word "zealotry" kinda threw me off a bit, it didnt seem like it belonged, it stunted the flow.
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yikes...for a quick write this WAS good...very emotional...I did enjoy reading it.
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For a quick write, I think you did a wonderful job on this.
Thanks for your entry and good luck.
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what a lovely write, i realy enjoyed this piece it was very impresive that you wrote this so quickly and it turned out great, best of luck in the contest
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thankss
xx.Emma<3
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