if i could.....
Oh,if i could
Than I would,
i would start it all over
and ,erase all of the the pain.
and. if i could
than I would
i would stop.
i would end it.
i couldn't
so I didn’t
i had to live with the pain
i couldnt
so I didn’t
I didn’t stop,
so you were the one who would end it
oh, and, I watched,(I watched)
(I watched)
oh, and, I waited, (I waited)
(I waited)
oh, and, I thought, (I thought)
(I thought)
as you left me
there alone,
On the streets of new York.
Oh, If i could
Than I would,
I would start it all over
And, erase all of the pain.
and. if I could
than I would
I would stop.
I would end it.
I couldn't
so I didn’t
I had to live with the pain
I couldn’t
so I didn’t
I didn’t stop,
so you were the one who would end it
so, I stand on the
side of the road,
waiting but you
never showed
anger and pain
are my fiends,
at least until this
Drama ends.
oh, and, I watched,(I watched)
(I watched)
oh, and, I waited, (I waited)
(I waited)
oh, and, I thought, (I thought)
(I thought)
as you left me
there alone,
on the streets of new York
Oh,if I could
Than I would,
I would start it all over
And, erase all of the pain.
and. if I could
than I would
I would stop.
I would end it.
I couldn't
so I didn’t
I had to live with the pain
I couldn’t
so I didn’t
I didn’t stop,
so you were the one who would end it
Author notes
this is another poem i have. i only added things and made it into a song.
Comments
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this could be a killer song with the rhythm of the repeats and the heartaches, lovely.
i love the repeat structure in this like echos
oh, and, I watched,(I watched)
(I watched)
oh, and, I waited, (I waited)
(I waited)
oh, and, I thought, (I thought)
(I thought)
as you left me
there alone,
On the streets of new York.
kewl thing is i can hear this in my head as dark goth or metal or screamo or evanescency just as easy. WTG!!!
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