His arms lay gently on my shoulders,
soft and loving eyes
whispering - I do love you
He holds on tightly
embracing me.
Picking up the box,
his shadow follows
as he walks out the door.
Tears fill my eyes.
Author notes
The back doors open scram
http://photobucket.com/image/open%20door/wichelspaintings/IMG_5863.jpg?o=319
A contest entry
- PIF forward contest of Rifkins I won gold! by Karl Weiss - Topaz.
1000 points, ended July 1, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
just read and enjoy
Comments
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A lovely piece expressing raw emotion, Thank you for your fine entry in my contest.
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I see you changed the titled but not the message. Sadly, I've worn these shoes on more than one occasion. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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So touching... until the AN
... a perfect pairing... Well done!
Ken
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