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Conclusion

Missing image

His arms lay gently on my shoulders,
soft and loving eyes
whispering - I do love you

He holds on tightly
embracing me.

Picking up the box,
his shadow follows
as he walks out the door.





Tears fill my eyes.












Author notes

The back doors open scram

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Comments


  • Karl Weiss - Topaz
    July 1, 2008
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    A lovely piece expressing raw emotion, Thank you for your fine entry in my contest.


  • leo2 gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    I see you changed the titled but not the message. Sadly, I've worn these shoes on more than one occasion. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • KayJay
    June 29, 2008

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    So touching... until the AN ... a perfect pairing... Well done!
    Ken