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Life's ways

Crossroads found,
or just a parting of ways?
Bewildered by merged options,
sat now in a pool of confusion,
my compass needle slowly spinning.
Is any path here truly right?

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  • crivanea
    August 5

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    of course not ...no path is ever right..becuase it is hman nature to doubt..and we are never satisfied..so no matter which way we go..we will regret it..but i like this..kinda reminds me of robert frost.

  • Shellibee
    June 30

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    My First Impression On This Poem Is I Cant Believe How Spot On You Are With How I Often Feel. The Last Line Really Says It All. 'Is Any Path Here Truely Right?' I'll Ask Myself That Everyday. I Really Love Your Work. Keep It Up.


    • Dreamana
      June 30
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      This aptly describes how I often feel too. Ty for commenting

  • toomysterious
    June 30

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    Crossroads are hard but sometimes you come out on the other side better for the experience. It never seems that way at the time though. This is well written, I can so see someone sitting at diverging paths looking at a compass that is spinning (my compasses always do that, think it is some kind of electrical pull, but then I don't know how compasses work, that may account for why I am always lost). Keep writing, I love your poems.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 29

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    Sounds like my life right now not knowin where to go or what to do just stuck in nothing thanks for sharing much love

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