I looked at it today
Stared for a while
You in the blue and white dress
Me in my black suit and pink shirt
Our first real night out
It's such a nice photo
One of those to frame and keep
Forever and ever and ever
The happiness you had in your eyes
Makes me cry every time
You are so beautiful
And I was that handsome
Together we were the envy of the room
The way it should be
Just like in the photo
Author notes
The reminiscing train seems to be rolling through hard...looking back at a good nice...and an ever better photo...so much is captured in that one picture...one of the only ones we have together.
A contest entry
- Beauty Strikes In motion, Photo’s or poems by nature mithya.
450 points, ended July 16, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great write i know how this feels as i look at matt and I on my desktop. this is a great write my dear! keep on penning! and yes a picture says a million and one words! hold on to that picture, them words, and them memories!
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Awww this is so beautiful in every way. I love how you put a picture into an excellent poem. You have such an inspiring way of writing. Thanks for sharing. This is extraordinary
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i like this...the memories one single picture brings. it represents so much more than that one moment in time...makes you remember the whole night; the food, the dancing, the drinking, the kissing. sounds like a really good picture =)
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