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Down by the Water

  Down by the water 3/10/06
(For my mom)


Sometimes at evening
When the lamplights are gleaming
I think of my own younger days

With my dad in the navy
And me just a baby
And I know how he loved me back then

Teddy-bears and ice-creams
Toy fire engines
And all the things you wish
Could come back again

Sometimes at evening
My thoughts they go stealing
Back through old memories’ door

To the street I was born in
Saturday morning
And my uncle Stan back from the war

Walks down to the river
To throw stones in the water
Just to watch the ripples go round

I would ask mommy why
And she’d always reply
With a gentle squeeze of my hand

“They’re just baby waves
Going round and around,
Getting bigger as they grow”

And I’d ask her again
And in her way she’d explain,
It was the way that all things come and go

And I miss her, and wish I
Could reach for that hand
And she’d explain all the things
I still don’t understand


And now,
Sometimes at evening
I have thoughts about leaving
For reasons I can’t quite explain

But somewhere up high
In the star-tattooed sky
There’s a voice that keeps calling my name

-oOo-

Storm clouds are gathering
Out on the horizon
And it looks like we’re in for some rain

Old westerly’s blowing
And they say it’s been snowing
Out on the Drakensberg range

Rumours of winter,
Remnants of spring
Reminders of days all gone by

Old derelict buildings
Where pigeons are clinging
Lonesome hoboes of the sky









Copyright Scotty 2006

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  • vivuyo
    November 18

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    you refresh my chilhood memories..
    i really miss my deceased mother. but those day are gone and can never be retrieved again.

    i would to give a positive comment that you have the ability to catch and hold the attention/interest of your readers by smooth flowing of ideas and execution/arrangement of words to lines-lines to stanzas, stanzas to poems.

    your are such a wonderful, prolific and matured writer.
    congrats!!


    • humblpye gold member
      November 18
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      Thank you friend for the extremely nice comment, I have tried to return the favour but can't find any of your work, please let me know?
      John


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 12

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    the beautiful memories of life growing up.sometimes happy sometimes not.. but the love of a mother who gives her heart and a little squeeze form hand well sought..  I give my hand in friendship sought for all the love mustered up comes from the heart.. this one gave me tears for the love is so evident here .. hugs always John and thank you for sharing your heart Always Angel♥♥♥


    • humblpye gold member
      November 12
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      Thank you Angel for your awesome comment!
      You have really caught the essence of this, you have a gracious heart my friend
      John♥


  • Ani Grace
    November 8

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    A lovely tribute...Instead of sadness or regrets, I can only hope that someday my children feel that kind of sweet melancholia.


    • humblpye gold member
      November 8
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      I have no regrets, everything is and was as it should be, I don't have parents anymore well, not in the earthly realm but I love them as much today as I ever did when they were around, probably moreso, now I have my own kids, and understand the link between us
      Melancholia, yup, it helps with the writing!
      Thanks for the comment
      John


  • Dulcyflower
    September 18

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    Tender, thoughtful

    A very tender poem on thoughts of younger days. It so sad to lose our parents. I lost my dad when I was 15 and my mom died in 1992. I can relate to this. I wrote a poem which I have not yet put on here dedicated to my mom, called My Shadow. I must find it and add it. Very well done. D X


    • humblpye gold member
      September 19
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      Thank you Doe for the nice comment, this was one of the first poems posted when i joined ap glad you found it!
      John

  • john,sometimes on here you read a poem that eally moves, and this is such a poem, its so tender and just well beautiful
    thankyou


    • humblpye gold member
      September 19
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      Omg, Theresa, i only found your comment here now, that's embarassing(for me)
      sorry about that, and thanks for the comment
      John

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