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Believe!

It came on wind of air soft tuned
waif of thought
bloomed and loomed
by friendship binding a lover's knot
and minutes moments
sky scrapes in thought

Saying now is in between of rhyme
a place to dream on borrowed time
and if you open mind of mend
past goodbye to a winged ascend
you'll see around the curve of grace
the loveliness of a caring face

I know this nudge is fulsome want
and seems to see past seam of real
to peel the skin
between the strands...
such faith's for you to understand

I've seen this bless of rip in weave
all stitched down
with stretched bereaves
to leave the moon of solo tone
to find a song not sung alone
but filled with fabric of forever
cinched with eternal hope
that can't be severed







 

 

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A contest entry for: Make me sigh in 24 hrs (any length).

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  • garde a l eau
    July 6, 2008

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    This is so pretty, and it takes on a special meaning for me as I was brought to very solemn thoughts today after the death of someone I have known briefly. I find your poem comforting, as all seem so temperal an shaky at times.

    The last verse is to "open mind of mend past goodbye to a winged ascend" Beautiful connections of life and heart!

    Thank you.


  • Nicolette gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    "to leave the moon of solo tone
    to find a song not sung alone
    but filled with fabric of forever"

    Deep sentiments expressed here, my friend. Your rhyming poetry is really good and this poem just sings itself.

    Yes, to believe like this, to hold on, poet!!



    ~ Nicolette


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 29, 2008
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    I loved all of this but the first stanza got me! Juls


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    This is gorgeous!
    Beautiful rhyme and flow with such lovely sentiment in every line...
    Sigh~

    Lynda


  • Randomly Beautiful
    June 29, 2008

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    You . Best wishes with this.

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