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You don't

I see you,
but you don't see me.

I wait for you,
but you don't wait for me.

I want you,
but you don't want me.

I love you,
but you don't love me.

I love you,
but you don't love me.

I love you,
but you don't love me.

I say it to you,
but you just don't seem to hear me.

I love you,


but you don't love me.

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  • hardeepb
    June 29, 2008
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    Wow

    Simple yet so so effective. This is such a reflective piece and one of the best I've read. Talking about all they things they don't do for you the little things...then reiterate that they don't love you over and over...I've felt like this for a while...not as much anymore but I know exactly how you feel. Keep writing =)