An empty corpse lays within the bare winter trees, quietly plotting her revenge.
She will have to come down to earth someday.
Author notes
20 Words. I'm sorry. If it's a problem I'll change it. But the words "more or less" made me think I had a bit of wiggle room in there.
Also, I'm not sure if this counted as describing it or not.
Picture Credit: Krista Johnson
A contest entry
- ::Pic Prompt:: by EverxEnding.
550 points, ended June 29, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks so much (:
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20 words is totally fine.
This is descriptive in a good way.
I love how you talk about her being an
empty corpse but then talk about her plotting revenge
It gives me a "looks can be deceiving" feel from it.
The last line ends it nicely.
One day she'll realize that she has to move on.
lol I think this is great. I could be wrong in what you were meaning it to translate into but what i take from it is stunning and emotional.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering! -
A bit dark, but beautiful. So often, I retreat into solitude, as I gather thoughts and reassess course. Life ever changes, warranting daily fine tuning as we weave frame through the maze of life. Flying high in thought, as we map paths from above the fray, we descend to exact our actions. A most enjoyable and unique writ, and I wish you the best in the comp
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I enjoyed this.
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