Listening to ghost songs
standing in the twilight fog
grey mist spreading in the blood
enwrapped in silence
standing in the twilight fog
drawn by a wraithly refrain
enwrapped in silence
contemplating the other
drawn by a wraithly refrain
grey mist spreading in the blood
contemplating the other
listening to ghost songs.
Author notes
I discovered an interesting, rare form of poetry the other day called a pantoum. Instead of having a repeating rhyming sequence, it has a repeating /line/ sequence. It was an interesting challenge. I think I'll definitely be writing more of these, and experimenting further with that general type of form.
A contest entry
- Back N Black by Poetic Obscenity.
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Comments
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Great entry - thanks and best of luck.
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=] It's absolutley gorgeous. I've never heard of that form before, however i've got to say i enjoyed it alot myself. Thank you ever so much for your beautiful entry and good luck.
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