You stood on the vast edges of my heart
And I zipped up my jacket covering up my worries
Preparing for you to jump off
And I was surprised, a little shocked
When you didn’t
No, instead you simply looked through me
And smiled, trailing upon the tiny flecks of my spine
You said you could be mine
Just as the sky bent forward and kissed your pretty eyes
And I hesitated, so very quickly realized
Instantly
And it was a strange way to be
Looking back at the debris slowly slipping inside me
Drinking up my sanity, and I felt the need
To talk, and bare the questions in my teeth
Like an undertow of the sea
These memories, these dreams, and you all pulling at me
Starting to burn with the small air I breathe
And for once I didn’t bleed in haste
As you tucked my wings inside their case
With velvet reckoning, even on the rocky surface of the days
I knew it, you knew it, and even the rain knew it
The earth confided in it with me, like a friend
A long lost hand, blushed and fragile to the night
It was as if I even moved away just a little I’d break you
And I didn’t want to experience that kind of death ever again
But it really was such a sight
Seen through the shades of the morning
Seen through the blankets of remorse
With the new season now returning to what it had lost
And I got up, took a look at your guitar
Took another image of you with me
And held it with safety in this heart
And maybe it wasn’t the easiest thing in the world
Maybe it wasn’t always so hard
But as I whispered into your trembling breath
The world may have stopped
Sometimes it just has to do that
Before it can actually start
Author notes
You know. Its funny. I would be laughing but its just kind of stuck there. And if i choke that would be perfectly fine. Lol. FINALLY I FINALLY admitted it. I did.
And it wasn't so bad, in fact, thats the biggest understatement in the world. It was extremely..There is no sense in explaining it.
ITS LIKE AN UNDER TOEEEEEEE.
WELL. I have to get dressed, pajamas after noon just isn't too stylish i hear.
But I'm happy. And that is just. Awesome.
GO KALI! GO BATMAN!
Finally. Geez.
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OH MY GODDD!!!!!! This was so good. You make me jealous you meanie. Like insanely nerdiously jealous!!!!
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TADAA
"And for once I didn’t bleed in haste
As you tucked my wings inside their case"
That is perhaps one the greatest lines you have ever written man!! I don't know why but it has like one the most perfect and tasteful imagination that I have ever heard you say.. I mean there has been better!!
BUT GOD I LOVED THIS POEM. IT WAS SO GOOD.!!
I CANT BELIEVE I DONT GET ON HERE ENOUGH TO READ YOUR STUFF. [
THAT RHYMES] BUT GAHH DUDE THAT WAS AMAZING. AND IT ALL WORKED OUT GREAT DIDN'T IT?! WE HAVE FAITH MAN. WE HAVE FAITH.
dUDE. LETS GO KICK SOME HONEY BUNS!! [and more ass.]
TEE HEE EXCUE MY BLUNTNESS!!
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"Just as the sky bent forward and kissed your pretty eyes"
LOVE, LOVE that line!!
And the ending is so perfect (should the second to the last line say "...has to 'do' that"?)
Regardless, you're so right about how sometimes it does just have to stop before it can start...you are such an insightful girl, wonderful mind..and I enjoyed reading this loveliness...it is hopeful.
♥
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YOU CAAAN'T ALWAYS GET WHATCHAA WANNT
BUT IF YOU TRY SOMETIMES!! you might finddddd! You get watchaa neeeed!!!
Sorry that song was on. And it seemed like it applied at the time...(at the time which was 6:12 p.m.) Wow..today went by fast. but i think thats cause i got up at 3. (i know i know...dont make fun of me) I write in the wee hours of the morning so ya know.
YES ANOTHER GOOD SONG IS ON!!!! Its called turn to stone! anyways i'll shut up now and say thankyou.
Thankyou!!! Especially for pointing out my mistake, sometimes i do that. i'm glad you liked it.
And hopeful?? yes it is...Ahh. It's been a good summer
I hope your life is as lovely as the daisies that grow in the valley of happppy jumpy frolicing creatures!
THAAAAAAAAAAAANKKyouuuu!!!!!!!! I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUU!!!!!! hahahahaha. in the poet awesome friend way of course.
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