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Early Sunday



5 AM, it's dark yet; crescent moon shines
with a star, possibly the planet Venus

Shadow of a creature asleep
in the middle of the street

Beneath the Hong Kong orchid tree,
a gathering of Muscovy ducks

In pajamas, are resting
until the car awakens them

Well, ok, no PJ's, lol, but I hadn't
known this was their snoozing place.

On Palm Avenue, not another driver
ahead nor behind us

In this Venice of America, most everyone
appears to be still in summer sleep

A few ambitious people approach the beaches
while the air is relatively cool and breezy

In this hodgepodge of a city which revolves around
the sun, there is no one now on Federal Highway

The big churches and the tourist establishments
are many hours from occupied

(though the 24 hour IHOP's bebopping )

After a while, we spy
glowing blue runway lights;
we have arrived.

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 30
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    like another world,
    this time before
    day's hustle begins.

    A perfect cpature!!

    Aesthete
  • I drive in early morning still in my Pjs one time I went to the gas station at 530 am we were out of milk lol this is great thanks for sharing Ihops is open all night where you are at
  • always quite a ride

    you have that why about you

     your description is always vivid.

    and lovely

    love the bibopping IHOP

    LOVE THE WHOLE WRITE

    GOD BLESS MY FRIEND...


  • Candy6
    June 29
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    Good write
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