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Beyond Words

Missing image
Traipsing through life’s hidden seams,
cerebrally sporadic
yet, quill flows steady.

Stimulated within folds,
seducing
the breathing rhythm
pulsing endlessly.

A story
sleeps within everything.

Visage bathed
in sunbeams
Motion pauses for memories,
influencing my sway…

Gathering wisdom
in the overlooked,
misunderstood whispers
caressing silently
from streams of shade.

Gifting me humble balance.

Sensations piqued,
foraging the unspoken.

Admiring…
windy pirouettes
prancing upon the scenery,

gifting all who are listening.
 

Author notes

Prompt:

"The poet's eye, in a fine frenzy rolling,
Doth glance from heaven to earth, from earth to heaven;
And, as imagination bodies forth
The forms of things unknown, the poet's pen
Turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name."
"A Midsummer Night's Dream" (5.1.7-12), Theseus to his companions ....

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  • kristian 28
    August 10

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    sentiment sometimes overwhelms even our strongest impulse,to fall in between the memories like puzzle,of days and nights traping us in each piece,declaring itself dominant in spite of moment ,in which we let it all go...good job,lol,


  • michael thomas gold member
    August 4, 2008
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    I clap for your well deserved poem. congratulations.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    Wow. What a beautiful poem to this prompt. I am completely taken with the lilting quality of your words and you last line is just wonderful - truly gifting all who are listening.

    Softly fragrant with beauty. Very impressive and well done. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Desire gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    Gorgeous~~

    Oh My this is a Beauty Hot Momma and Love the images You have weaved especially that last line which speaks volumes

    along with windy pirouettes-
    so much said in so little words
    Keep that quill dancing Precious~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    This is simply lovely. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Lane


  • thepoetssoul
    July 1, 2008

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    This is an exellent piece of poetry, vivid in it's quest to tantalize the minds eyeYour presentation and imagery is of the charts giving the reader a memorible read.Very soft and subtle are your gentle words of beautyI truly enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing your unique talent

    Tony


  • vici377
    June 29, 2008

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    perfect take on the pic prompt..
    windy pirouettes
    prancing upon the scenery,

    absolutely love this..thanx so much for sharing..and best of luck in the contest..hope all is well dear one..blessings..namaste...

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    This is beautiful written I hope that you are doing well miss you loads good luck in the contest have a great week


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 29, 2008

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    beautiful write here hun . . .
    whispers like a warm breeze as it's read.

    best of luck

    Tasha

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