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Sea Of Dreams

With satisfaction and nothing to achieve...
Once done you disappear and just leave...
I'm left with nothing to believe.

You and only you give me...
Love with no love guarantee...
That's always your policy.

I'm the mirror of your ideal...
Slowly my sanity you steal...
Lost without direction might reveal.

Me and only me...
Am the one to fall on my knees...
Seems I'm lost in a sea of dreams.

Girl why all the confusion...
Stick to a single conclusion...
Let go of the minded delusion.

Just come clean in this love game...
I only want you but it's not the same...
Your very fear of losing takes all the blame.

Why do you always come?..
All this might be confusing to some...
At this rate what will our life become?

I just want someone to hear my screams...
Rescue me from these tormented gleams...
Or I'll forever be left drifting in a sea of dreams.

Some are afraid of losing a love... Again.

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  • wow

    honestly, i dont know what to say about this poem. it hits home on so many different levels for me. i know that i will have to read this a bunch more times so that i can and i know that i will have to read this a few more time so that i can understand it. all i know right now is that this poem made me well up with tear5s as i was reading it. you have a great talent with you words.
    Rob

    • Climax gold member
      July 4
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      Well, you can always pass by my page whenever you want some good stuff to read! Thanks for the nice comment!

      Stay cool and Rock-N-Rule!

  • blueyez
    June 29

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    wow! This so sounds like the ups and downs my man and I go through. love is a cruel thing!

  • aww this is amazingly powerful,
    im worried about you now hun,
    i love you you know, this poem is very beautiful,
    i love it, so deep and painful,
    all my love,
    kitty xx
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