Apocalyptic dwelling
into horrific dimensions
of human nature...
drenches hope,
with a bloody stain-
Life's betrayal
spawning warping rage
before you sign
your soul away.
Author notes
Prompt: Abomination ~ In 25 Words
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/25/1 by SuicidalLover.
1050 points, ended July 1, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Wonderful choice of words. So very well done. Thank you for sharing
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truth of life's shortcomings
very well written with interesting details of a mixed write between fantasy and reality,it truly feels like today one must sign their soul away to do anything or get anything,,I truly enjoyed the form and lines you have penned here,,,blessings of life,light,laughter and love...Firestorm
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Ouch. This burns and stings...
Rage will truly push us over the edge. Well done. ~Pamela
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Ooooo.....how very sinister.
This is very ... wow I don't know a word.... unique? Either way I like how you took the prompt. Thank you for entering. 
~Kystal Angel
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Evocative words set to a sadly too familiar theme.
You imbue a few words with the tragedy of modern
society's dark face. Blue
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Beautifully penned. Human nature and nature are at odds with one another often. Sadly, our habits betray the sanctity preserved in a world designed for the living. Zombified,we war with the natural order, wreaking chaos upon souls with the unnatural assaults on integrity trust. You pen with amazing depth. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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Geesh!!! Are you in a bad mood down there??? Do I need to come down and show you my horrific sunburn....that would make you smile!!!
I am liking this....Excellent take on the dire prompt
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Lol, that's too funny
Go cheer her up!
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