On her knees in front of me
Biting her lip; excited
No clothes on and very wet
Her sweat and her juices
Unbuckle my belt slowly
As the tent grows inside
As she runs her hand along it
Large cock, waiting for her
My jeans are pulled off
Next my boxers; my cock stiffens
She begins to water from the mouth
Snatching it off speedily
In front of her face, gazing
Seven long and almost two wide
Big for her mouth; that's even better
As she grabs it; squeezing hard
She slowly jerks as the pre-cum runs
But she can't take it anymore
Puts her face over my shaft; drools
Heavily wetting my whole cock
Now she's ready; tasting
As she puts the head into her mouth
And begins to swallow my snake
I feel it; as my eyes roll back and close
The feeling stopped abruptly
I open my eyes and I lay there
In my bed naked; cock hardened
Door open; smell of sex in the air
She wasn't there
Was it all a dream...?
Author notes
hardeepb
For Christina's contest
Hope you guys enjoy...I tried something different...feedback welcomed heavily!
A contest entry
- favorites by xXcrazychristinaXx by Lonely Christina.
1000 points, ended July 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mmmmmm.... SEXY by Still single.
500 points, ended July 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this! Just like a dream stops before you can finish! Damn!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for the entry, It's cetainly sexual, no need to enhance that but perhaps it's a little short on mystery and suspense.
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great write i didn't expect it to be a dream amazing!
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BOOOO
i hate when dreams end that early. it sucks (no pun intended =P) but great write, very vivid! i like the way it ended; made me have to go back and re-read it knowing now it's a dream lol
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lol this is great! awsum imagery and very dirty
my kinda poem 
mybe it was a dream but a very good one!
xoxo- christina
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