Complications now increase to maximum magnitude,
and emotions just keep getting grotesque;
and to sue you from corruption
its to divide myself in fragments I'll never recover...
You envision me as a threat;
the hostile reaction of my devious hurricane;
you wish to conclude my chapter,
by imprisoning me inside my proper torment...
Yet so you overpower my will
and conduct me into self-suicide...
You expect me to jolt my soul
with the hands that have stained it...
I will never let you release your torment,
I will never debate you;
because to sue you from disruption,
would be to reveal the certain
and conclusive agony I have lived through...
I can never fortell,
and you will never win...
For my soul has no desire to recover our loss...
And all that matters now, is the agony you serve in,
and this torment of you that still runs over me,
like a hurricane...
~♥~
Author notes
"I have to make you understand my torment is just like the hurricane you always put me through"-XXVampireeyesXX
option #2
Option #3: in YoureNoGoodForMe contest
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt: FANTASY & DARK Part I by Rinoasis.
600 points, ended July 13, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options !! [PW ALLOWED!] by innocence jaded.xx.
625 points, ended July 13, 2008, 47 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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Amazing write my daughter. This was so powerful and full of emotion in every single line. Congrats on the bronze. This was so sad though. I'm always around whenever you need me.
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Wow, an excellent poem. I love the pic you chose. I also wrote a poem inspired by that pic, hehe.
The imagery is deep, dark and suspenseful. Your choice of words is quite unique.
Blessings,
~Evolet
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Ohhh, wow, love this is incredible ! I loved the picture you used for this. It made your poem so strong & wonderfully deep. The darkness was just captivating. Perrrfection right here
"You envision me as a threat;
the hostile reaction of my devious hurricane;
you wish to conclude my chapter,
by imprisoning me inside my proper torment..."
Ahhh those lines seriously just popped out from my screen. Ohkay, maybe not literally, but they definitely put me in
Amazinggg. Thanks for entering dearest & best of luck to you ! ♥
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