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Never Began

I don't care
what you havta say
You never cared
about us anyway.

Sweet ignorance
carefree lust
nothing more
possibly less.

It was over
before it began
It had begun
before it had even meant anything.


Four days
Two minutes
Thirty seconds
of annoying pain and pleasure.


It's over
It never began.

Author notes

inspired by

 

I Don't Care by Apolcalyptica

and

I Caught Fire  by The Used

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  • hks
    October 6, 2008
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    "possibly less."

    amazing: so sweet.

    much love