Come with me tonight
walk under the moon light.
Let us pretend to be,
young lovers, you and me.
Walk by my side,
I will be your guide.
My arms around your waist,
my heart beating fast,
this is the moment I want to last.
All alone just us two,
I want to if only you do too.
The universe is ours to hold,
come closer, we can reach our goal.
The stars and moon are closer too,
I have the feeling,
they are watching over you.
As your breathing now subsides,
I hold you tight,
our only witness,tonight
was the sky at night.
A contest entry
- Seduce Me With Poetry (Age 18+ please) PRE-writes/NEW poems! by Melissa Burns.
300 points, ended June 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your favorite Prewrite by SignifyingNothing.
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300 points, ended August 5, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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cute..sweet...so romantic..i like it..not a very creative theme..but i love the poem..u def. have the potential to go far..good luck in the contest
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This is a great romantic poem, sweet and simple, yet very pleasing. I really liked it alot. I would love it if a significant other wrote a poem like this for me, it's really nice. Thanks for entering.
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Thank you, for your comments, this poem I wrote, with my muse in mind,as she is the one who got me writing again , after not even thinking about poetry for many years. Best wishes Carl.
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Beautiful!
There is a very lucky young lady out there somewhere, Carl. This is a really beautiful poem.
much love,
Catie
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I listen to alot of country music so this was kind of like a nice mesh of songs for me - though I'm sure you didn't intend it to be I enjoyed it alot, thanks for entering it into my contest!
m burns
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