What spirit lies within your soul?
It it beauty...
Is it dark and evil...
Is is undecisive...
Is it cold as ice
or
Is is a fire of passion and warmth?
A spirit...
Like the definition of love
Can be limitless in meaning
But it lives forever and ever
so
Why not make it beautiful...
Like a blooming red rose.
For your spirit is your reflection...
And how you live your life!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Spirit by Nicole Hanna.
4000 points, ended July 13, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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sweetheart this is absolutely beautiful.. I really love it. and yes all of this is so true. excellent job with this.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Some great imagery and warmth throughout. Beautiful words with deep meaning. A fine write. Good luck in the contest.
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Some wonderful imagery here, you have made the spirit a beautiful thing, given it life. A lovely write, good luck in the contest
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Thanks for your entry! There's spirit here for sure, though on a more socially expansive sense than a personal one. I would love to see your spirit in a more personal poem, if you'd care to try again.
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