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Color Me Blue

Color me red
I'm gone, I'm dead
I don't know why I'm still waiting
When I only get misled

Color me green
I'm lost, unseen
Maybe I'm just looking
For what I really mean

Color me pink
I cannot think
It's too much to get involved
As the weakest link

Color me yellow
Watch me go
I am who I am, I won't change
I'm sorry if that's a blow

Color me violet
I payed my debt
I am not afraid to sing
But I'm only half of that duet

Color me gold
I'm cruel, I'm cold
But that's part of me, can't change it
I try to keep myself controlled

Color me blue
I need you too
But it's not enough to say it
I have to know it's true

Color me every color now
But changing me I can't allow
Even if I always get hurt
Someday, to love, I will know how

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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  • Dawn Angel
    July 3, 2008
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    lovely and I agree it's an interesting use of color. Very nicely penned.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 30, 2008

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    you know this is the most creative use for colors i have ever seen, keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing