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Unspoken Apology

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4-23-1971
6- 29-1993
In loving memory of my son Micheal Shane-
He died without first asking me if I would
mind it.


I remember when he died,
Was in the dead of night,
I remember how I cried-
His face so still and white...

I sensed his need to apologize,
To me for dying without first warning,
Yet he could not lift his eyes,
To face the greivous morning...

I yearend to make him understand,
That death was not his fault,
And grasped his cold white hand,
For hours and deep in thought...

When they planted him in his grave,
A mother's heart was beyond broken,
And the apolidgy he gave,
Within his heart was never spoken...

Walking away, leaving him behind,
Beneath fresh rose covered earth,
I staggered but was not drunk with wine,
And slapped my thighs, but not with mirth...



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  • evelynxxoo
    October 22, 2008
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    i feel your pain in this i too wasnt ready for to face my sons grave seeing the muck piled high and the sea of flowers couldnt prevent me from thinking my child is underneath that my heart was already broke during the wake but seeing that mountain of clay


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 9, 2008
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    I am just speechless...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 9, 2008

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    Tears Flowing...

    This is such a sad fate, when a son passes before the mother. I know my aunt has a hard time with my cousin's death, as well as myself. But in her eyes, I'm sure even though she knows she's with Jesus, It breaks her heart daily all the same. For she was only 40 years of age, and her mother's 72 and still misses her daughter dearest. My heart goes out to you, and I can see you love and adore him very much. Love ya my friend!

    -Timothy


  • Remnant
    July 7, 2008
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    Very touching dear poetess
    thak you for sharing


  • celestial
    July 7, 2008

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    Great write.

    Thannks for sharing this. It's hard, and it's admirable how you stay strong. My deepest condolences.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 29, 2008
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    This is a very loving memorial
    to shane
    Exelent write

  • Bob Fox silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    Judy

    To know of such a loss. There is nothing I can say my friend that would make any easier. But love pours out from your heart

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