I'm never gonna be him
that guy
that smug bastard
mr. ambition
mr. i'm gonna make something of my life
that empty shell of a person always focusing on the future
no, the presents never here for him
no never him
i'm the otherone
i'm the bum
the underdog
the one who by some miracle the most marvelous girls seem to fall for
the one for whom there is no future
ask not for whom the bell tolls
it tolls for thee
but never for me
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Great Job.
This is a really good poem. Usually a llot of guys right the opposite. But I like how you don't. Makes the poem stick out more.
Gives a powerful impact to the other side.
~Silky
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That's really strong. I like it alot.
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