Beautiful love come into my life.
Come and make me ALIVE,
ALIVE like the fire and fumes,
ALIVE like the sand and dunes,
Like a child with first smile
like a bird flying HIGH.
Emtions seen on everyone's face,
LOVE flows everywhere without a phase.
beautiful love bring out the songs from within.
Grace from above, IS only then seen.
Like the sun brightens the sky
And the stars light in the night
Come into my life and enlighten everything
When a smile is given from the soul within,
When the heart shouts on top of its voice,
WHEN the melodies surface from every BEING.
OH!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE come and live here for sometime.
With this soul which search's you to fullfill its CORE.
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Can anyone relate to this ??
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Ooooh, Nice! I like the bold words, it adds to the awesome flow of this, and I also like the rhyme in the same line. I just rode right along with this...just one typo in line 7 on "emotions". Very nice work.
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Beautiful
A very healthy reminder of what is truly worth finding. Thank you for sharing this touching poem. It seems to put the real purpose of life so beautifully into perspective.
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Very tender. And yes, I can relate...
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A very lovely sentiment. Love the purest essence of life a well described feeling. Happy trails neighbor.
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Even an old man
Love makes the world go round,
Spring srill blooms in my heart.
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A very liberating piece close to the hearts of everyone.
A worthy read indeed. Happy trails.
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Very strong, powerful Call
Excellent poem
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I like this...has the feeling of something taking flight, feelings that seem to lift off...wonderful words...open words...honest...very well done...PK
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thanks
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A prayer, a call for liberation of the soul
Which ever, a powerful cry that touches the heart of the reader, bearing in mind that love carries responsibilities sometimes beyond ones capability to honorWell done
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thanks for the thought
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Love, the infinite power to conquer all. If only it were that simple. Love is the beginning and the end. Your passion shows in this well constructed peom.
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I am in love with love. Anytime i read your love themes it brings smiles to me and i forget critiquing. You make ...
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Hi thanks .... gud some1 is smiling...
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there is some magic in love ,divine or otherwise.....i think that is here...
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Hi , thanks for a lovely comment . i could feel it in this write toooo.
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Lovely Write
Be patient for all good things come to those who wait. I enjoyed reading yoy poem. Lovely write. Take care, Sandy
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Such a warm heart welcoming the coming of love.
This was stunning and articulate.
Love lives in your heart,
it does not have to come to you,
you have already come to it.
Thank you for your kind words lassie, help yourself.
Me Irish Grand ma used to tell me,
LOWELL!!
Write something grand,
for you may be
entertaining Angels,
Unaware.
She was right in this case.
Blessings my sweet child,
LOWELL POE
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Thanks for the beautiful words, I have a feeling of walking in the clouds alone.
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that is okay, not everyone can understand everything in life.
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Well I can understand that.Anyways Thanks for your time.
Susan
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