Waiting for time, time for waiting
a shadow on the steps, debating
whether the time is for creating
time to create something, captivating.
Shadows on the steps grow long
the need to create grows strong
but now the time just feels wrong
and the need finds someplace else to belong.
A contest entry
- Quickie..... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended June 29, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel free to be as critical (or not) as you like...
Comments
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wonderful
very smart description
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well.. this was surely a tongue twister.. Or it could just be me..lol.. You did a wonderful job.. the flow was smooth and the rhyme was nice as well.. You created something unique here, and I really liked it.. You did great! thanks for sharing. best of luck..
Angel
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Time,
that invisible yet omnipresent element binding us all. It speaks differently to each with its own voice.
I find myself pondering the better usage of my own as I read your offering. Niaish for sharing with us here.
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We all need a place to belong.. and we often have to create that ourselves! Excellent write for the prompt!
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