i'd like to read you
like a book
and see your darkest fantasies
in print
i'd like to know
your fairy tale
and know you
like i know myself
but sadly
you are not a book
that i may put
opon my shelf
Author notes
i wanted to see what it would sound like if i did this style....short and rhyme-y...it was a bit odd for me....
i sound like Dr. Sues......cool
Comments
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I like it! Its the metaphor that makes it fun.
Khia
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Oh yea and the poem was really good. Even if you think it sounded weird. It's something different than your other poems. This one is almost more friendly than your other poems, which those are more dark. Either way, both styles are good.
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I like short poems. Most of my poems are short and have the same format as this one. When I was younger, I used to write the longest poems that you have ever freaky seen. I'm amazed that people on here actually read and commented on those poems. That was a long time ago, on my other account. About four years ago. I took them down and decided to make a new account, this one.
Any ways, nice poem. People being like books would be a hell of a lot easier on me. I'm always trying to predict people and because people are so unpredictable, it's hard to do that. Well, I try to predict people that I let in. For example, my lovely Jason. I just have trust issues. He knows that.
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lol
i sound absolutly rediculous...lol funny, i feel..... whimsical....
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