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My sis

She went far away
As soon as she was 13
And when she came home
Joyfully
Our house was full of happiness
Only once a year
We got to see her
But that time
Was a time I wouldnt miss
She was caring and responsible
Independent yet a good companion
A sister you would want
Being the oldest
And me being the youngest
A ten year difference
But still I loved her so much
And now though she's closer
Not with us still
A different city
The look on her face
When we arrive
Is a reward enough for the journey
LOVE YOU SIS!

Author notes

My sister has been asking me to write a poem for her for some time.So I wrote this one for her and just saying I love you Tammy.

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  • cupcakealia
    February 17
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    adorable


  • PerfectTonight
    September 2, 2008

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    Thank you! I'm broke as far as points but I'll be sure to check out your work and give a genuine comment!!


  • Slick99
    August 10, 2008

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    aw, i bet you miss your sis. i think your sister would be glad you wrote this. -slick99