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My Heart

Give me my heart Back
Yes i want it back
Because i will give it
To someone else who win my heart

A contest entry

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    I like this short and sweet write! Giving us back our heart can be taken two ways..The other still has control on our heart, and also we cannot give up loving them?...Either way you want to go on with life and love again....Nice write, and keep penning poet...Love your poetry!


  • innocence jaded.xx
    June 29, 2008

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    Oooh, this is definitely very different. I like it :] I also liked how you used that picture I gave you. Thanks for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥


  • innocence jaded.xx
    June 29, 2008
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    Ohkay, I'll give you a picture to write from, because those seem to be more inspiring than quotes

    http://i26.tinypic.com/2w21s1s.jpg

    Best of luck to you !
    ♥