Many trees softly mutter
As the birds start to flutter.
The sun is rising above once more.
I take a walk across this path, I've choosen to explore.
The trees are sparkling with dew.
As if to tell me it's a day brand new.
No need to worry about my afflictions.
Time to enjoy all of gods depictions.
Need to get away, if just for a little while.
Walking on this beaten track, I smille.
Only this fresh air....
will save me from despair.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #1 by Frodofan.
300 points, ended July 12, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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Nice. The picture definently has that nice brisk morning feel to it. The rhythm here could be smoother and more consistent, but overall not bad. A hike can do a world of wonders.
Thanks for entering.
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