So the pretty little girl woke up one morning all alone. She just let the tears roll down her face and didn't say a word of what was wrong. She was no longer the most important thing in his life. His new playtoy has arrived. Her day went by oh so un-eventful as night came she sat down. Pretty little girl sat there staring out her window thinking of all the wonderful things he said. Thinking of how he always made her feel. Telling her how he always loved her. Her mascara ran down her face, thinking of all the perfect things he did with her. Showing her how amazing life can actually be. The longer she sat there the more insecure she felt. He was so amazing so perfect.
Days went by, not a word of him. Nor a word from him. The awkward silence with her had everyone worried. It wasn't that she didnt wipe the running mascara off her face, it was that it never stopped falling. Pretty little girl stopped wearing color. Not goth, nor emo. Her life only became black and white, so she thought she should fit in. After all, it was the only thing she did fit in with. Weeks began to trail by, and the tears slowly stopped. She thought of the awesome relationship she had. But somehow she lost it, without ever understanding what happened.
As time went by she met some guys. None of them ever as perfect as the one that left. But the truth was he was never there.
[[It was just a dream]].
He is still the guy of her dreams.
Author notes
Emotion~Overrated~Underappreciated~Overwhelming
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This is a nice reflective piece of work. I loved the last stanza. It ends the poem off very well. Rather sad : ) great write Xds-gX
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Wow such an awesome poem Erin! I'd agree with it. Why are you a teenage failure? If anyone should have that name. Well, I should have that label. I done so many things wrong. I've hurt so many people and done a bunch of stuff. No body would love me if they knew the whole truth and that's why i keep it to myself.
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THIS WAS AWESOME! I am incredibly happy having gotten this in my contest! Beautiful write!!!
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I absolutely loved every second of this poem it was wonderfully written. Very cleaver use of words and I definetly found myself wanting to keep reading. i loved the flow it definetly went along nicely. Wonderful write. Very refreshing and unique. I definetly enjoyed reading so I will be reading more if I have not read more of your poems to begin with. Keep writing you are a true poet. Maybe you can check out some of my poetry i would really love to hear your opinion.
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A hearfelt story of the love bringing the meaning of the life as well...and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..
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