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ignoring the stain (image slightly adult)

Simply put,
I have sockets.
Caves that hold dark tired eyes.
To slide you a glance
holds the same definition
as to offer exhausted sighs.

I've stuccoed
up angry holes
punched in cheap apartment walls.
Given up water
during dry midnight thirsting,
dissuaded by the stretching hall.

Calloused teeth
grind gristle flesh;
four hours stale with counter thaw.
Soap-opera mute,
flashing shadows on carpet,
pupated flies continue crawl.

 

A cavern

slightly singed

by the fires of lost hope.

As I break my hands

bone by bone in boredom,

I wonder how I'll tie the rope.









 

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prompt: APATHY

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  • random waves silver member
    August 1
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    Dark indeed

    Made me shiver!


  • malmadre gold member
    July 26

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    Utterly ghastly! where have you been so long, come back to the five and dime Jimmy Dean Jimmy Dean.

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    July 18
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    Now this is a good job ...

    all the way 'round. I think you nailed it.

  • omg, this is so ... gruesome (?)
    but totally great, and dark.

    you diction choices are superb, I think. A perfect entry for the prompt.

    I wish you all my best!

    S.P.


  • righteousme
    June 30
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    love it love it love it... once more you have slayed me...


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 29

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    That was truly wicked and

    smartly written..what a feast to enjoy!
    I hope everyone is seeing how dark transforms into
    bold piercing lights of truth.......fearlessly.
    What freedom was enjoyed in the writing of this poem!
    loved it...wish I wrote this!
    powerful!
    ears/Seattle
    one of my fav linels:
    To slide you a glance
    holds the same definition
    as to offer exhausted sighs.
    way to write APATHY!

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