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Caught

Green Man glows
with a deathlike cast
affliction of a moonless night.
Yet two creatures of the light
are perched in precarious plight
caught between seeing and believing.





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  • sunoir
    November 15, 2008

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    I liked it even without seeing the pic prompt. It stands on its own. I agree has that eerie quality.


  • Map Of Stars gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Oh very thought provoking, and eerie - I like the last lines, "Caught between seeing and believing"


  • toomysterious
    June 29, 2008
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    Like the reference to seeing and believing, definitely fits the prompt.

  • Solo Wisp
    June 29, 2008

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    ahhh ... well, my annihilator ... seems you stepped into a groove where green men groove with moonless nights. heheh Gosh ... superb flow ... seeing and believing ... hmmm. yes. heh


  • crimsondew
    June 29, 2008
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    Good take on the picture...last line sets one thinking..
    All the best in the contest!

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