Green Man glows
with a deathlike cast
affliction of a moonless night.
Yet two creatures of the light
are perched in precarious plight
caught between seeing and believing.
Author notes
Picture prompt, see contest page
A contest entry
- ♥ QUICKIE♥ for the night owls ** by OnceUponAMind.
825 points, ended June 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked it even without seeing the pic prompt. It stands on its own. I agree has that eerie quality.
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Oh very thought provoking, and eerie - I like the last lines, "Caught between seeing and believing"
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Like the reference to seeing and believing, definitely fits the prompt.
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ahhh ... well, my annihilator ... seems you stepped into a groove where green men groove with moonless nights. heheh Gosh ... superb flow ...
seeing and believing ... hmmm. yes. heh 
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Good take on the picture...last line sets one thinking..
All the best in the contest!
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