The moment of my life
Was the day
When you and me together
Went out to play
It was all perfect until
The moment your cell phone rang
You was busy making juice
I picked up the call
No it wasnt a call
But it was a short message
I found other girl has given
You a message with her heart
It was really perfect before that
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Heart felt,
once again touching the heart, one who feels the hurt inside, is the one who can express such, deep and profound emotions .I am deeply touched by the sadness, can relate well.
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"I found other girl has given you a message with her heart"...So familiar, and painful....A very real write...Keep penning..
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i can feel the pain you speak of this in poem, this poem flows nicely thank you for the entry to our contest, and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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awww
sad! Good tho! Thanks for entering! -
Oooh, definitely liked this alot
How you put that picture into words was captivating. Amazinggg. Liked this a lottt ! =D
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Ohkay, since I haven't given out a quote prompt yet, I'll give you this :]
"Sometimes our minds just
makes us go on clutching something.
Sometimes we get so used to holding on that
we forget to let go."
Hopefully that's okay ? haha best of luck to youuu♥
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