A silhouette of sensuality
frames our feverish thoughts
Whispered wonder crosses lips
and desire traces heated chests
Spinning me sexual in seconds
that explode euphoria...
... into pleasure's peaks
previously unknown
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 30 words
Prompt: picture..
Credit: Passion_by_Melindee
(it's offical.. my muse is exhausted .. sigh..lol)
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie... Sensual.. by Angelflower.
600 points, ended June 29, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh wow, didnt i tumble upon a lovely poem
lol, great job and congrats on the bronze
lovely job and keep it up
tak ecare, stephanie
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A wonderful sensual write. I really like your lines "Whispered wonder crosses lips and desire traces heated chests" Absolutely stunning! Congrats on the bronze!♥
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passionate and sensual. Congratatulations on the bronze. excellent imagery, and wonderful take on the prompt.
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Quite tastefully written, sensual without being pornagraphic. Describes depths of yearning and pleasure..nicely articulated write, great work...
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Hot Hot Hot
Congrats on the Broze Jacks!! Another wonderful poem with lots of steam. Brings back memories of heated engagements. One to bring in a new year of pleasure! Great job hun! Don
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oh my!! *blushes*...such mastery
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hehe i would feel a bit exhausted but proud ..of this one hehe
It is sensual and you manage to share so much within a short space of time sis
Congrat's on the bronze
Cind
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Muse exhausted? I bet after this.
pinwheels are fun.
Congrats on the bronze loverly Queen!
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Well I know that I want to experience these things you call pleasure's peaks .....Not sure i have seen those sights lately.....Excellent as always and another congrats on the shiney!! w00t!!
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Sensually sensational! Well done and congrats!
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Congrats on the bronze!
Whoohoo, hot and steamy. Superbly penned Your exhausted muse rocks! Congrats on the shiny
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lol at your AN
well done here!
Tasha
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A perfect take on this picture! Love every word. Congratulations on your trophy
Gaylene
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Sensual indeed...great write .....congrats on your bronze.....seems your sensual writes have been missed .
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This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on bronze
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Bravo!! you did a wonderful job!!! and if your muse is exhasuted then you could have fooled me..lol.. You really brought that picture to life with sensuality!! thank you very much for sharing.. best ofluck.
Angel
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I loved these lines " Whispered wonder crosses lips
and desire traces heated chests...excellent write!!!
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See why we've missed you? Sensual and beautiful...
Ken
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I likes it.
Heh we both used the same word.
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had to change it.. too many words.. lol
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hey..find your eyeball yet lol?
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When your muse moves...
it can move straight into my contests.
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I'm afraid it isn't moving
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Moving parts are what it's all about.
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