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Run

lips sewn shut
by uncertainties
how to say
how I feel
want to stay
want to run
you're holding me down
hold my hand
hold me
hold me
let me run
let me free
hating who I was
hating who I'm becoming
becoming who I used to be
never the same
never different
run away
running
staying
stay
stay here with me, honey
hold my hand
hold me
hold me
let me go
I could never stay here
not with you
not with me
always run

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  • Daisuke
    July 10, 2008

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    It has a strong sense to it, not as much of raw emotions but there's not a single rhythm to the beat of my heart to when reading.


    • fuz Z navel
      July 10, 2008
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      you know i had the strong desire to write but i didn't know what to write so i started writing. i had strong emotions at the time but couldn't quite figure out what they were. so i just wrote and this is what came out. i have still yet to figure out this is out about. I figure my intuitive side is the lesser dominate that comes out when I write like this and the dominate side has to study and study to figure out what I meant