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electric shock

when i opened that door to your face,
my breathing seemed to escape me,
and my heart would not stop racing,
nothing but you is all i see.
and when your lips met my own,
my legs felt so weak,
my head so light from your cologne,
your loving all i seek.
and looking into those eyes,
i find that there is no other guy,
and i should stop telling myself those lies,
and your forgiveness i should buy.
you whisper into my ear i love you.
i smile and wrap my arms around your neck,
and i whisper i love you too.
loving you is our own reck.



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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    June 28, 2008
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    this is good...i like the flow...good luck

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