Friends are forever I know that's true
A gift sent from heaven
Along this journey helping us get through
A friends as pretty as a flower
comfort throughout life's stormy shower (hour)
A friends like a candy so sweet,
Like the chocolate chips in the cookies we eat.
When I find myself on the ground
You always seem to be around
Picking me up erasing the frown
Girlfriend you are as special as any princess
You deserve a beautiful crown
Our friendship will cross oceans wide
Yet we will always stand
Hand in hand
Side by side
Im so glad I have a friend like you
To cherish my whole life through!
AND I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU
~LEAH MARIE VEGA~
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It's always a blessing when you have a friend or friends who are so close they're almost like family. I have a few of those.
This was a wonderful and heartwarming write
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I liked it. It was well penned and happy. I never read happy stuff so that was a nice change of pace. I really liked the read.
Thanks.
Peace
Love
Harmony
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its good but this poem needs little work your stringing your lines out and making the ryhme pattern choppy like at the begining the rhythm is messed up by using too many words try to shorten some things up that still get the same point across otherwise this was a good poem
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