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Innallaha ma'assabiriin

Hardships come in my path
I lost the count,
Martyr suffers only once
I suffer endlessly,
People mock at me
Hit my heart and my soul
Place hurdles on my way,
But I persevere
Because, Allah promised
Help even from angels.

Author notes

“God is with those who persevere”

i have written these lines after reading the commentary of the quote.

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    June 10

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    Yupz. HE always helps
    HE loves us 70 times more than a mother
    How much HE Care for us na
    but we are too bad.
    hum HAq ada he nahi kartay
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • abuyi
    March 13
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    aww Alliya.. this is so beautiful dear!!!


  • couldbeworse
    March 3
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    beautiful message and very well done. May Allah bless you.

  • Pari Ali
    February 16
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    very beautiful

    a lovely message of hope, for oft times we forget.


  • sOuL
    July 25, 2008
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    for sure i am gonna bookmark it
    awesome


  • sailor ptolema
    July 25, 2008

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    Hardships come in my path
    I lost the count,
    Martyr suffers only once
    I suffer endlessly,
    People mock at me
    Hit my heart and my soul
    Place hurdles on my way,
    But I persevere
    Because, Allah promised
    Help even from angels.



    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    hardships cross my path
    so many times
    I have lost count
    martyr suffers only once
    whilst I suffer endlessly
    people mock me
    strike my heart and soul
    shove hurdles in my way

    still,
    I persevere
    Allah promises
    help from angles


    what do you think of my edits? I made a few changes i thought my strengthen the flow; and make the diction more effectual; I also corrected some grammatical and syntax errors.

    Otherwise; this isn't bad . About a thousand times better than the dribble I've read today. I still suggest edits; and possibly consider expanding it a bit to let it breathe

    thanks for sharing!

    -sailor ptolema



  • crimsondew
    June 30, 2008
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    Congratulation on the HM!

  • Amarige
    June 30, 2008
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    Very lovely piece. Mashaalah sister..Thank you so much
    Ruby


  • crimsondew
    June 28, 2008
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    Inshallah..Allah is always with us in hardships and success...
    Lovely poem dear

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