The young princess
So innoccent and sweet
She's nothing more than
A daddy's girl.
All in pink,
With silky blonde pig tales.
Never does harm.
Never does bad.
She always obeys her father.
Never talks back.
She is the pure virgin
Every slimy guy looks for...
Here comes along the slimy
Dark, cold hearted punk boy.
The young princess catches
His dirty eye.
He is more like the devil
In her father's eye.
Somehow she is attracted to him.
No telling why.
He is completely opposite.
Then again they do say,
"Opposites attract!"
Anything can happen right?
He toys and plays with her.
Trying everything to get
The sweet young princess
To do what he wants.
Gentle kisses on the cheek,
Softly rubs his hand
On her leg,
This is going somewhere!
She feels uncomforable.
Then she likes it.
She is over his spell.
She is corrupted.
The slimy punk boy
Gets what he wants,
Then just leaves the young princess
There to cry.
+!~I used picture number one for this poem~!+
Author notes
Just wrote it to a picture promt.
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Very well Written....
a classic tale of the sweet and innocent young girl going for the dirty young bad boy punk!!! Then left to cry when he uses her and abuses her...wonder why nice girls are attracted to the bad boys....The eight wonder of the world I suppose...Great job writing this I was enthralle all the way throught it...~~Toni~~
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Powerfully written! As I read I had an idea of where it was going...yet you just pulled me along into the story. It is a sad story...and all too common.
It definitely seems to go with the picture.
Keep writing!
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Happens all too often!
A great write! Reminds me of my ex a little he was the bad boy and I was the good girl corrupted. and oh! how he left me crying!!
Jennifer
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I like your way of writing as a complete story. The story is classic - princess and corrupter get what they want. Life is so strange, that it always seems that the best lessons are those where opposites attract. It seems we almost cannot avoid liking what we do not have. Or, maybe, not liking it, but wanting to actualize it in our life, somehow. Very nice poem - one I am pleased to have read.
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Wow
i liked this alot. It went along well with the picture. Very well written and i also loved the flow. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
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Thank you.
This picture spoke more to me than the others.
plus i like it haha.
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